I am pleased to learn that you gave up on the Politically Correct (but Wrecked) version. The snippet you have given makes it clear that your translation goes from the unforgettable to the unreadable. -----Original Message----- From: Kent_Rasmussen <[log in to unmask]> To: [log in to unmask] Sent: Wed, Jan 5, 2011 10:33 am Subject: Re: a new Adventures of Huckleberry Finn Like that of many others posting on this subject, my first reaction to this news was one of astonishment. However, after giving the matter further thought, I wonder if it wouldn’t be better to carry the revision of _Huckleberry Finn_ even further. And, I’m happy to report, I’m ready to help. About sixteen years ago, just for fun, I started to rewrite the book myself, with the idea of publishing it as _The Politically Correct (but Wrecked) Adventures of Huckleberry Finn_. To provide some of the flavor of my 100% non-offensive text, here’s my version of Pap’s drunken diatribe. (Note, by the way, how neatly it handles the uncomfortable matter of substituting “slave” for the uncomfortable word that begins with the letter following M in the alphabet.) "Oh, yes, we have wonderful institutions! How's this for an example: I heard of a free African American from Ohio who dressed better than any European American in town. He even had a gold watch and chain and silver-headed cane. Oh yes, he was quite the dandy. What's more, they said he was a multilingual college professor with a vast repertoire of knowledge. That was bad enough. When they said he could vote in his home state, that was too much. What, I wondered, is our country coming to? Well, it happened to be election day and I would have gone to vote myself, if I been in a condition to get there safely, but when I heard that there's a state which actually lets a person of color vote, I stopped and said that I would never vote again. Those are my exact words--everyone heard me. Why, the country can founder for all I care. And to think of the presumption of that man--why, he wouldn't have conceded my right-of-way unless I pushed him aside! When I asked why he wasn't sold back into involuntary servitude, do you know what people said? That he couldn't be sold unless he spent six months in the state. How's that for an example of our government institutions? Pretty sad, if you ask me."